When we presented the pitch of our film to the class we received very average feedback. I believe that we could have increased our interest in the audience by presenting it to our class in a more in depth manor. This would then have gripped the attention of the audience more so that they would have been more indulged within the presentation. The average throughout our presentation was 30/60 which is exactly 50%. From most of the feedback to improve the main area that next time we need to concentrate more on is the cast members. I personally believe that the characters that we chose were suitable.